By Erin O'Brien
pictures by Erin O'Brien
Date: May 1, 1974
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In the Summer a flying saucer came. Blurp was its pilet.
They landed on Earth. Blurp liked Earth.
Another space man came out. His name was Rils. They went to investagate thier new planet.
"Scaplatoe?" said Blurp.
"Nacka" said Rils.
"Nracit" said Blurp.
Earth man came. "Lipasatit!" said Rils.
"Slatle" said Rils.
Same to you fella
They got in their ship, and rode away!
THE END
23 comments:
The dialog is a bit weak but your plotting skillz are awesome!
From little acorns etc etc so now your a mighty oak!!
George Lucas PASSED on this??
Aha, finally - the sequel to ET.
1974- that would be PREquel. Actually, maybe she should call her lawyer...
... Slatle!...
Eric
Masterpiece!
Fabulous! Love the pics!
ahhhhh.....
hey, denny is funny
I can't believe it hasn't been optioned by Hollywood yet.
And you were cute as a bug when you were a little one (And cute as a bug now !!!)
Big hugs
Sleepy
Brilliant. I thought the dialogue was brilliant, especially for one so young.
I bet those were illegal aliens here to rape the US treasury and take the booty back to their home planet for irresponsible partying and wild alien sex. Bastards.
RJ
Well, I am impressed, but I can't say I'm surprised at all. I'm also very encouraged by this lovely 35-year timeline. I enjoy writing. When my daughter showed interest at about age 4, I fostered it in every way I knew. At 19, she's still at it. And now I know that some girls DO get the bug and make it their life. Thank you for today's post.
sweet
the "pilet" should have been named "zorch"!!!!
LOL
I wish I had gone to your school instead. Whenever I drew pictures of aliens, the teacher sent me home with a note.
love it man, love. it!
just before she turned 5 my daughter wrote and illustrated a book for me for Father's Day. It was about a princess asleep in a tower. She'd been asleep for a long time and she was waiting for...(and here I thought, of course, the typical bullshit: the Prince who comes to kiss her and wakes her up right? No.) she was waiting for...another princess (in the form of my daughter) who brought her a beating, red heart. As soon as the sleeping princess received the heart, she woke up. "And they lived happily ever after." Brilliant! Gay marriage AND a heart transplant. Ya gotta love the little ones. The progressive little ones.
Rils really has a way with words!
Why does every word look better with a "tle" or "stat" in it? It's a unwritten law.
Awesome, simply awesome.
Mr. Baddie Cloud
It's been one helacious week.
I am off to give a keynote address this morning and to see these nice comments sure does boost my confidence. Honest.
Thanks.
Yer a natural, baby!
jo
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